Dear Jack,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing this letter to ask if you could accompany me to the gym every day either in the morning or evening.
To explain in detail, as you know, I’m getting married in a couple of months, I wish to look slim and handsome, and hence, planning to lose the gained weight. My gym instructor informed that I need to do more physical activities because I’m unable to lose weight since the time I joined there.
As I’ve practiced lifting the dumbbells and running on a treadmill for 60 minutes, I’d like to try other physical activities which could help in reducing the weight such as, Cardio, dip bar and leg curl. Additionally, I’d like to increase the time limit and follow the diet chart strictly.
Moreover, you’re a gem in doing such activities, so I thought you’d be the right one to motivate and help me overcome the fear of practicing with other instruments.
Hoping to meet you soon.
With love,
Jay Williams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94152046784 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67677881621 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1530013142 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241316048231 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109783380398 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771587563624 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159083184559 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740659934379 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.