You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reason.
Write a letter to your boss.
In your letter:
Explain the reason for the leave and the length of the leave you need
Explain how you will keep up to date while you are away
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear sir,
I am writing to inform you that i need a break of one month, due to personal reasons which needs some attention.
My wife is suffering a lot for past two months because chest pain. Doctors have confirmed that, there is a block in one of the vein in her heart. So that surgery has to be done immediately to save her life. To take care of her, i need leave from (03-08-18 to 02-09-18).
I would be grateful to support and give my suggestions from hospital through my mail. Surely, i can keep my self updated by going through all the mails whenever there is a possibility. Perhaps, i can keep in touch with my team mates for clear status that is taking place in the office.
Meanwhile, my work will be carried out by any of my colleague, to whom i have taught all the process. However, my support will be there if they have any query. I will try my best to give my support at a possible way.
I look forward to hear if you have any suggestions.
Yours faithfully
Revanth
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| 2019-06-06 | Arun revanth | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sir, I am writing to inform you that i need a break of one month, due to perso...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to save her life. To take care of her, i need leave from 03-08-18 to 02-09-18. ...
^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... from hospital through my mail. Surely, i can keep my self updated by going throu...
^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... they have any query. I look forward to hear if you have any suggestions. Yours f...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44805194805 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51359098752 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.478433451 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2727272727 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176131960856 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622714930607 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571617048369 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091147855133 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661604964647 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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