Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear sir,
I saw an advertisement that your hospital requires unpaid workers. Being a medical student it will be a great opportunity to work there. Probably, it will be pleasure to serve the patients in their bad situation. It is near by my home so that there will be no difficulty to travel during my free time.
Currently im the only one to complete an open heart surgery in my college, so working in the operation theater would be a great for me. Nevertheless, im also good at first aid treatment even though im still pursuing my medical studies.
My ID proofs will be submitted wh joining. As your advertisement states that the starting date will be from 1st of may but my availability will only from the second week of may. However, if you agree with my joining date im generous to serve your hospital during my free time without wages.
Regards
Revanth
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... patients in their bad situation. It is near by my home so that there will be no diffic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66883116883 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66785143328 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.828619845 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149469905895 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058527033619 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570394069519 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101857103165 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105435047242 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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