In many western countries there is a increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantage and disadvantage to couple having no children ?

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In many western countries there is a increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.
What are the advantage and disadvantage to couple having no children ?

Most of the couples in western countries prefer not to have children . However this trend has become very common nowadays while there are many upsides to this practice, there exists few downsides too.

Certainly, there are many advantages on having no children. For instance most of the couples in USA, Canada lean towards not to have children for financial benefits, for being less responsible and much more, Because of having kids they sacrifice many fun activities such as traveling around the world and living a luxury life. Nevertheless, they have less responsibilities in the absence of kids which make them to live a happy life of their own. Probably it helps them to achieve their career goals and grater achievements . Living together culture is not only followed in western countries but also in many other place, I can say it has become a fashion among the youngest couples . Despite that still there are numerous couples prefer to have children.

On the other hand, there are many drawbacks in the absence of kids, which affects their joyousness and that may lead to depression. Nevertheless people manage to lead their life in a systematic manner. Most of the couples have less care about their future development without kids and moreover, there will be no further generation to take care of them when they grow old. So, number of old age homes on western countries have increased during a decade. Therefore life is not going to be easy without kids, especially when they are aged.

To conclude, there are many benefits and drawbacks in not having a child. Couple who love to live alone have a satisfying life in the beginning while they have to face a tonnes of problems and difficulties when they grow old. In my opinion giving birth to a child is a gift from god, having children makes life beautiful even though there are few difficulties.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88012618297 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58347928855 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9819765935 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393491321763 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151774858508 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148344759556 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240630269356 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06445947301 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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