You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say– what was the item– why it was important that you get it immediately– what you suggest the company

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regards to a delay in delivery of groceries which I ordered on your company website. As per the policy the items should have been received the next day, However, the same has not arrived.

Let me explain in detail. Being a working mother I usually prefer to order my groceries from your website as it saves my multiple trips to the market. Apart from the regular home used items, I have also placed an order for some perishable food stuffs. I am afraid if the delivery is not on time, they will turn bad, consequently being unsuitable for consumption. I am running low n supplies and need the delivery urgently. We are also going for a picnic over the weekend and I need to prepare some snacks for the trip. Receiving the delivery on time would have helped me to stay on schedule and not rush with the preparations.

I therefore, request you to kindly look into the matter on an urgent basis. Could you please track down the status of my delivery. Request you to please expedite the process without further delay. I would be delighted to receive the groceries as soon as possible.

Thank you for understanding.

Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours Sincerely,
Katie Adams

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
..., However, the same has not arrived. let me explain in detail. Being a working m...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73094170404 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56645668452 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3803834609 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9375 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19424323898 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577180501265 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057109490278 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125713077199 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072398232844 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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