Some opine that it is vital to maintain tidiness and cleanliness at home as well as at your workplace by keeping everything in the right order, while another school of thought have opposing views. In my opinion, I completely concur because a clean environment increases creativity while organizing makes it easy to spot things.
To begin with, cleanliness cannot be forced and it is a deeply embedded virtue. It is believed that a clean space results in a clear mind, thus helping one to think better. Although, some may argue that organizing can be tiresome and boring, it is known to stimulate the brain to function in an orderly manner. Moreover, since your thought process gets clearer, the same reflects in your work or personal life. For instance, according to a recently documented survey many creative people namely writers and poets, believed that they were more productive and could function better in a clean area rather than in a messy room. Consequently, proving that there is a co-relation between cleanliness and productivity.
Similarly, arranging things in an orderly manner is advantageous as it eases any panic situations that arises when something is lost or misplaced. Items that are frequently used are kept within the vision range whereas, those that are sparsely used are kept further behind. Furthermore, if the items are clearly marked, it eliminates searching, as everything is easily available. For example, in a supermarket, items are distinctly labelled and displayed making it easier for the customers to make an informed decision before purchase. As a result, organization simplifies the process of identifying things.
In conclusion, according to a common quote - "cleanliness is close to godliness" it is absolutely essential to maintain discipline and structure at home and work. Even though it may not have any unusually drastic effects, it helps in making finding easier along with ensuring complete focus on work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nown to stimulate the brain to function in an orderly manner. Moreover, since your thought process g...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ctivity. Similarly, arranging things in an orderly manner is advantageous as it eases any panic s...
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Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...iness is close to godliness' it is absolutely essential to maintain discipline and structure at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29392971246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00905532886 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629392971246 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7836568575 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161622830571 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442424143208 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599143735294 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920130876781 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692385524023 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.