You play sport for a local team. You recently heard that a player of your team is in hospital. Write a letter to your team mate.
- Say how you feel about the news
-ask about the treatment in the hospital
-suggest some ways to cheer him up
Dear Bhangu, I was so shocked to hear that you were hospitalised. After all, just few days back we were practising basketball in the college court and you seemed to be in a very healthy shape. At first I didn't know how to react but soon enough I came to my senses.
I was wandering about the treatment you are receiving at the hospital. Is it good or just satisfactory? I heard that nurses in that hospital are skilled but wanted to hear from you, and what about your medications? Our coach told us that the doctors there are quite experienced and know how to handle a situation especially with the athletes.
In any case however, you don't have to be tensed, just take some rest. Team will visit to cheer you up. Meanwhile, you can watch TV or you can read some magazine. You can also ask someone from the staff to play a CD of our matches in TV for you.
Yours faithful
Bikram.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... be in a very healthy shape. At first I didnt know how to react but soon enough I cam...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he athletes. In any case however, you dont have to be tensed, just take some rest....
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... matches in TV for you. Yours faithful Bikram.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, while, after all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32530120482 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45103004171 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2260774426 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8333333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356044435069 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123048510587 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960206054976 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205878273261 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898966649306 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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