You play sport.(e.g.football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in hospital.
Write a letter to your team mate. In your letter.
Say how to you feel about the news.
Ask about the treatment in the hospital.
Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up.
Hi remo,
How's my champ & future's 'Ronaldo' doing? Sorry i was not able to take part in yesterday's game that's the reason only by today morning i came to know about your ankel injury. Trust me, it's quite shocking for me as you are the best striker we have in our team but i am sure you will recover soon before knock out stage.
By the way, hows treatment is on going? And whats doctor's opinion on you injury? are they taking care of you well, i have heard "Bridge Candy" is one of the best hospital in town.
Hey, your girlfriend was asking about you health too. i have told her, remo is doing pretty well and getting chilled with nurses. you know Steve is still have once again failed driving test, you often used to tell him he will never drive in future. Poor fellow.
Anyway i have to wrap up for now, please write me back if possible. get well soon.
best Wishes,
singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi remo, Hows my champ & futures Ronaldo doing? S...
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Hi remo, Hows my champ & futures Ronaldo doing? Sorry...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my champ & futures Ronaldo doing? Sorry i was not able to take part in yesterdays...
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Suggestion: that's
...ot able to take part in yesterdays game thats the reason only by today morning i came...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
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Suggestion: this morning
...esterdays game thats the reason only by today morning i came to know about your ankel injury....
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... thats the reason only by today morning i came to know about your ankel injury. T...
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...he best striker we have in our team but i am sure you will recover soon before kn...
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... before knock out stage. By the way, hows treatment is on going? And whats doctor...
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Suggestion: ongoing
...stage. By the way, hows treatment is on going? And whats doctors opinion on you injur...
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...nd whats doctors opinion on you injury? are they taking care of you well, i have he...
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...ed with nurses. you know Steve is still have once again failed driving test, you oft...
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...en used to tell him he will never drive in future. Poor fellow. Anyway i have to wrap ...
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... now, please write me back if possible. get well soon. best Wishes, singh ...
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... me back if possible. get well soon. best Wishes, singh
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...possible. get well soon. best Wishes, singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, still, well, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44311377246 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01098880248 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748502994012 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0857133888 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234774220452 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700131080224 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720095203176 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126894525198 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642085257058 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.