You play sport.(e.g.football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in hospital.
Write a letter to your team mate. In your letter.
Say how to you feel about the news.
Ask about the treatment in the hospital.
Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up.
Dear Rajat
Last night, one of our team mate told me about your severe injury while you are doing practice for our next match. As I was absent yesterday, so I do not know anything about that. but I feel really sorry for you.
you are not only my good friend but also you are a good player of our team. I felt really agony when I heard about you because you motivate me in each situation.
My friend told me that you are admitted in the "Sanjivani" hospital. that is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. I would like to suggest you that their is doctor"Anshuman"and he tailor made in this kind of problem, so if you consult with him that will be beneficial for.
I know you can not play our next match but do not feel bad because I have a good news for you. our school authority announced a scholarship for you for your dedication towards study and games. you will get your letter very soon.l also come next Saturday and stay with you for whole day and we will enjoyed a lot.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
With best regards,
Urvashi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
..., so I do not know anything about that. but I feel really sorry for you. you are...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...at. but I feel really sorry for you. you are not only my good friend but also yo...
^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... in the 'Sanjivani' hospital. that is the best hospital in our city and yo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ities. I would like to suggest you that their is doctor'Anshuman'and he tai...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tailors'.
Suggestion: tailors
...eir is doctor'Anshuman'and he tailor made in this kind of problem, so if you...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...atch but do not feel bad because I have a good news for you. our school authority announced...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...bad because I have a good news for you. our school authority announced a scholarshi...
^^^
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...our dedication towards study and games. you will get your letter very soon.l also c...
^^^
Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
...stay with you for whole day and we will enjoyed a lot. I am looking forward to heari...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. With best regards, Urvashi.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42723004695 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93206677675 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586854460094 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4175132647 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370465002608 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135026578979 0.0766984524023 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068539593296 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206597132651 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785253546222 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.