You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Mark,
Hope you are recovering well from the accident which happened last week. Although it will take some time however I will pray for your fast recovery. I am writing this epistle to inform you about an exciting cricket match we played last week with “The Bush Runners”. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate Bush runners gave us a good fight but we won the match by a narrow margin of two runs, therefore, it was a third comprehensive win of the season for us. Although everyone played a pivotal role in securing the win however the victory would not have been possible without the all-rounder performance of Mathew who scored crucial fifty runs and took three wickets. The match was played in warm and humid conditions moreover the atmosphere was electrified by the huge presence of local crowd who supported both the sides with great enthusiasm.
Lastly, I felt satisfied with the performance of the team who outplayed the opposing team in all the departments. This match, in particular, will help us to introspect our weak areas for instance fielding for the upcoming matches.
I hope to see you again post recovery.
Best wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope you are recovering well from the ac...
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Line 4, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d both the sides with great enthusiasm. Lastly, I felt satisfied with the perfor...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you again post recovery. Best wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, well, as for, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91414141414 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66932928748 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1283750621 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 4.34317383033 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219003652633 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706648782299 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685925096703 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125671936737 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759629979627 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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