You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
I hope you are doing speedy recovery from the accident you meet last week. Unfortunately for you and the team that you could not participate in the last week game also, therefore, I decided to write a letter to inform you that our team have won the game against South hall team and with that win, we have qualified for the finals which will be played on coming Sunday.
Further, I like to inform you, that the weather of the game was not good for us at early morning hours because of the rain which interrupted the field few times, later in the afternoon the sun starts shining and it remains till the end of the match.
Everybody is excited after winning this game and I am happy to reach this stage and feeling confident for the upcoming final.
Your absence has created a difficulty for us in the maintaining the batting line up and team management is looking for the alternate option till you are declared fit for the play.
Get well soon my friend, hope to see you early on the field.
Best wishes,
Vishnu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you are doing speedy recovery fro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling confident for the upcoming final. Your absence has created a difficulty fo...
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Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you early on the field. Best wishes, Vishnu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5291005291 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23556087511 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.591928947 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284476891024 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112100541929 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098808586776 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128067254657 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11646351871 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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