You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend . You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:-
- tell him which team won
- describe the condition on the day
- say how you felt about the match
Dear Mike
A warm greetings to you. Hope you are doing good and recovering well. As you were not able to play with the team last week due to the sudden accident, so I am writing this letter describing about the match event.
Fortunately, the winner of the match was our team. The situation was tricky because in the beginning the rain started due to which the pitch of the cricket ground became wet, after sometime the match started when the weather become pleasant and sunny. Our team was able to hit the target of 250 scores but the match was twisted in the last over. It seems that we will not be able to achieve the target scores and the match will be lost.
Suddenly, the last player was catch out by me. Everyone took the breath of relief when I took the wicket at the end.
It was great pleasure to be the part of the team who is determined in achieving the goals.
Hope to meet you soon.
Regards
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'greeting'?
Suggestion: greeting
Dear Mike A warm greetings to you. Hope you are doing good and rec...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als. Hope to meet you soon. Regards Bill
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34682080925 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06289556373 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0557293553 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3636363636 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251258686637 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859306996206 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947386902164 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133325053381 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126756834096 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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