The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree . Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the increasing traffic on the roads is the serious concern, in order to limit the vehicles on road, the unnecessary traveling to workplace, malls and schools should be reduced, as it may be helpful to reduce the traffic, but i totally disagree with the comment and this essay will state the reason behind the disagreement for the above mentioned statement.
To begin with, all the work cannot be done from home, as in case of professionals such as doctors, engineers, pilots and so on. Health professionals cannot perform work activities through home because few patients may need to be operated that can be done in the hospital not at home. Even the engineers have to visit the site to perform the skilled activities. Therefore, restricting the traffic by reducing the travelling to work is no solution.
Indeed, other measures can be taken to reduce the overcrowding of vehicles on roads. Instead of using own vehicle, public transportation services can be utilised. New Delhi is one such example who stepped forward to take the early measures in reducing traffic. Firstly, introducing the odd even formula for local city vehicles and secondly, free public transportation service for women.
To recapitulate, forbidding the workplace travelling is no solution to reduce traffic, therefore, other alternative steps can be helpful in eliminating the traffic on roads.
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- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree . Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23423423423 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96273489674 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9074785529 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205983928932 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081723961582 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526860492905 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122717288025 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102611551842 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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