Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language & gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say:-
- what is your motivation to learn a new language
- how can the teacher help you
- when will you be ready to start
Dear mam
A warm greetings to you. I have received your contact details from my friend Mike, who was your student at St. Joseph school. I wish to learn French, as I am immigrating to France in the end of this year.
I had searched for teachers who can help me to learn French but I was not able to find and when I talked with Mike, he gave me your details. He told me that your way of teaching is incredibly fabulous because you always encourage your students, even if they are not able to perform well. Learning a new language can be a difficult task but if I learn from you then definitely I will be able to perform good and clear the language exam which is required as eligibility criteria. I can start up the classes from the next week.
Hope you consider me as your student.
Regards
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'greeting'?
Suggestion: greeting
Dear mam A warm greetings to you. I have received your contact de...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g to France in the end of this year. I had searched for teachers who can help ...
^
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u consider me as your student. Regards Bill
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29605263158 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37597479631 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7763644095 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346646385053 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115705595085 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721301677113 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224433778121 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543499378141 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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