Television dominates the free time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that technology has given enormous amounts of entertainment such as the internet, television, and social media. In all these, many people watch TV in their leisure time after completing their daily work activities which makes them less active and non-socialize in society. However, I partially agree with this notion.
Apparently, a section of society vehemently deems that television dominates the free time of many individuals because of various reasons. The first reason is that the social life of an individual becomes silent if they get involved in watching series, movies, or any channels on the television because they will not have time to interact with their loved ones such as family, friends, and relatives. Moreover, they become lazy as they do not participate in other physical activities like performing regular exercises in their free time or involving themselves in household work like cooking, cleaning, and buying groceries which are normally done by housemaids or servants nowadays. This kind of lifestyle makes them lethargic which can affect their immune system as well as on body-weight. Therefore, with all these reasons, a person should indulge in other activities, so, they can lead a healthy and well-being lifestyle.
On the contrary, several numbers of people these days do not have more free time to enjoy their lives because of the highly competitive world. This change has been driven due to the technological and digitalization world. With this effect, the stress and tension of a person have increased more which can be reduced by relaxing at home and watching television. For example, a comedian's show on TV reduces the tension and stress of a person's mind. Due to this reason, many people watch TV after coming home from a busy hectic work lifestyle whether he or she is a student or a worker.
By way of conclusion, although watching television relaxes a human mind of an individual in their leisure time, it has some drawbacks which can be easily encountered if a person should follow a proper timetable to lead a healthy and physically fit life. As the quote says " The more television you watch, the more consequences of life you will faced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 350, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
... the more consequences of life you will faced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07967032967 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7894060004 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.522644432 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277311370158 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834798250926 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491186151752 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154891686754 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427760628739 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.