Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons?
Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
A good education is a necessity of today's fast growing world.The more educated a person is more value and a good place he or she will be at.This is a general belief which is true to much extent.Young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities is becoming highly popular.After doing basic schooling from their hometown,young generation prefers to study in cities due to many reasons.One of the reason is good colleges and facilities in an outside world.Here,we will discuss about advantages and disadvantages.
Rural areas lack in providing good amount of infrastructure and good staff as compared to cities.In toay's competitive world,it is a must for one to continuously grow and keep themselves updated all the time.This will be not be possible in rural areas.The more a person work and interact in an outside world, he or she is able to learn more.This will bring the change in their overall personality and handling the situations.This includes dealing with various kind of people,certain situations and decision-making abilities.In cities,pay scale is also higher where in rural areas one will not get that much.
Now,disadvantage include long working hours,irregular and poor eating habits,staying away from family members for a long period due to the work commitment, traveling issues,compromise with health and so on.These are few of the disadvantages which can become difficult to handle with the time.But,irrespective of knowing all this,young generation is ready to face and accept all kind of challenges which are a must to survive now a days.
At the end,I will say one must experience another world to grow as an individual and learn for the betterment of their family and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21708185053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39540572401 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.864358615 49.4020404114 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.5 106.682146367 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23592076117 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123508326554 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967324146912 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123508326554 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967324146912 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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