You read an article in a newspaper about a city/town. Some of the information in that article is wrong. Write a letter to the newspaper editions.
In your letter, you should:
• describe how you know the city/town
• tell what the problems are
• suggest what you want the editor to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to let to know that the information published in your newspaper day before yesterday about Ludhiana is not entirely correct. I am the native of this town. Not only my roots are connected with this town as my grand parents live here, but also this is my home town because I am born and bought up here. Our ancestral home is near to Sikh temple 'Gurudwara Singh Sabha'; about which the article was and I visit there almost daily.
Let me explain the errors thoroughly. Firstly, it was mentioned in your article that this is the fifth largest temple in town and it serves food which is known as 'Langar sewa" only on weekends which is not entirely correct. The corrections are, it is the second largest Sikh temple in this city and Langar is available full day and all year around. Moreover, you have written that this was constructed and maintained by municipal council, however, it is completely under the governance of 'Gurudwara Committee', Amritsar.
Would you please correct the information and add the footnote that the information given in last article was wrong? I also request you to please take good care while publishing historical and religious facts as the circulation of your newspaper is enormous.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Kirti likhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation. Yours faithfully, Kirti likhi
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65267241068 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2142658978 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251099910209 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889456201081 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614295267103 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162773277176 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473522674662 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.