You recently travelled by plane but lost your suitcase You filed a claim with the airline but have not heard back from them Write a letter to the airline Explain what happened Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it Find out what they are goin

Essay topics:

You recently travelled by plane but lost your suitcase. You filed a claim with the airline but have not heard back from them. Write a letter to the airline.

- Explain what happened

- Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it

- Find out what they are going to do about it

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to my suitcase which was lost on Sunday, March 14 when I traveled on BA flight 5445 from London to Oslo. I would like to receive some information regarding the status of my bag.

I checked my bag in London yet when I went to collect it at baggage claim, the suitcase did not appear. A representative at the airport opened a case regarding the suitcase (#4565435) and said someone would be in touch with me within 48 hours. A week has now passed, however, I have not received any updates.

The bag is a 20-inch, charcoal gray, hard side Samsonite suitcase. It has four wheels and there is a black leather luggage tag bearing my contact information. Inside the bag, I have two pairs of shoes, several items of clothing including three men's dress shirts and two pairs of trousers.

I am extremely disappointed that I have not been contacted by any representatives of your airline and even more so by the failure to return my suitcase. I would like some information regarding the whereabouts of my bag as soon as possible as the personal items in the suitcase are of great importance to me. I was informed by the airline representative that I may be entitled to monetary compensation in the event my suitcase is not found. Please inform me regarding this matter.

I thank you in advance and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

John Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion regarding the status of my bag. I checked my bag in London yet when I wen...
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Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...suitcase are of great importance to me. I was informed by the airline representat...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, regarding, so, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.664 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78411494016 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.064091041 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2857142857 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158454334533 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528445712538 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479219543648 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888890482951 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422399756944 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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