Dear Manager,
I am intending to write this letter with reference to the feedback request received from your side two days back.
Although, it was my first journey that I made with your Airlines but my experience my awesome. Most appreciable thing was that the flight took off at the right time. Secondly, seats were extremely comfortable and thus I did not get too tired even after eight hours of flight.
Moreover, the best thing about this flight was the food as it was very savoury and was served at the appropriate temperature. Also, the staff was quite helpful and well mannered.
Lastly, the only thing that needs improvement is the entertainment section because there are fewer movie channels and the quality of the headphones were also not great.
I am looking forward to fly with you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to flying'.
Suggestion: to flying
...also not great. I am looking forward to fly with you soon. Yours faithfully, J...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fly with you soon. Yours faithfully, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98581560284 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54942590716 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716312056738 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.457498083 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 4.34317383033 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182626434591 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685826163167 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533379634895 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913177548971 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063835479421 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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