You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
· describe what type of presentation you have in mind
· what topics it would cover and how long it would take
· who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Mr Gaurav,
I am writing this letter to ask for your permission to give a presentation in which I would like to share some knowledge gained during the recent carbon control conference.
Last Friday on 22nd June, I attended a conference held at International Scientific Hall, Mumbai on the Carbon Control. I would say it was very insightful and the vast amount of information shared with us is very crucial for everyone. Hence, I would like to give a presentation on the same topic. Along with that, I would also be sharing what actions can an individual take to control the carbon emissions.
As the actual conference included people with expertise in that subject matter, it included a wide variety of topics and it took 3 hours to complete the conference. But, I would like to cover the most critical topics that people can relate to, and for which people can take actions. The topics that I would be including in the presentation will be to the point and will take only 1.5 hours to complete, such as Carbon emissions, Issues faced Hidden Dangers, Strategies for control, etc.
Although it is very important for every individual in our company, but I would like to give presentation first to the project leads and senior members of the project. Once the information is shared with the senior members, they can plan and help me schedule another presentation for the junior members and new joiners. I would like to give the presentation in the conference room so that it doesn’t disturb other people. The timings can be decided after your confirmation.
Thanks for your time and support, awaiting your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Amit Azad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en Dangers, Strategies for control, etc. Although it is very important for every ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9219858156 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75161767493 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3664482084 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267382255901 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968716423303 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790025864429 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171575436787 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102204597125 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.