You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir/Madam
My name is Sorena and I am writing because I have left some important business papers at your hotel. I had a very great meeting at your hotel in room No 102 at 5 pm. Unfortunately, when I was leaving I was on a call with my parents and they gave me very bad news so I forgot totally about my papers.
The papers are on a desk near to the window on the left side of the room close to the radiator. There is also a pair of black leather shoes on the floor near the desk. On top of the papers, you can see my company's name, Roxi. I hope you can find them otherwise it will be terrible and I may lose my job.
Please if you found them, keep them with the reception and I will come tomorrow morning there and collect them. In addition, I have noticed that your hotel provides no parking place for employees and most of them must spend lots of time to find a parking spot and this makes them exhausted and frustrated. I believe a parking place can help them to have more job satisfaction. I hope you find my suggestion useful.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ope you find my suggestion useful. I look forward to hearing from you as soo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32420091324 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36523509731 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3992017341 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8461538462 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272021388571 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092494939283 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672163830543 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147106831556 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373516978914 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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