You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the mana

Dear sir,

I am writing with regards to the missing document after the meeting at your hotel. There was a meeting held at your hotel on the last Friday evening, We were 10 people who booked the hotel from 3pm to 6pm. we were seated at the right end corner of the room and I sat near the window. I believe i must have left the papers on the side rack of the window.

The paper contains the important designs of our company new project and it need to be submitted on this coming Thursday. It also contains the flight ticket of our employees traveling on a business trip. In addition, the information of the new recruits and their contacts information are on those papers.

I would really appreciate if you can find those papers and secure them. Also since I am out of town and will arrive on the Thursday morning I would request you to post the paper to my office address directly. I will do the payment for the postal charges.

I am awaited for your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Vincent Moron.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e who booked the hotel from 3pm to 6pm. we were seated at the right end corner of ...
^^
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...om and I sat near the window. I believe i must have left the papers on the side r...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50810810811 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34982864644 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9907755802 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201551151396 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544773144276 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544653699545 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845452055363 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712562800044 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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