Dear Sean,
I hope you are fine, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have changed my job recently. As you know, I wanted to quit my last job so badly as it doesn't provide me proper wages nor proper timings. While I was browsing the internet I came across a role of supervisor at ABT service, the requirements matched my profile and so I have applied for it. After a couple of round i was selected for face-to-face interview and within next day i got selected for the role.
Its been nearly 3 months since i have joined the company, I enjoy working over here. So far i have learned multi-task skills required for the role. Soon i will be moved over to the head office situated at Dublin. Well, I have given an opportunity to work independently right from the start.
And also I have arranged a birthday party for my dad on 31st of this month. I hope you and girl friend to come over here and have funny with us. Also I have booked a holiday resort the following day so that we would enjoy the sea-side campfire and have some outdoor fun.
See you soon,
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nted to quit my last job so badly as it doesnt provide me proper wages nor proper timi...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...applied for it. After a couple of round i was selected for face-to-face interview...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e-to-face interview and within next day i got selected for the role. Its been ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...task skills required for the role. Soon i will be moved over to the head office s...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... come over here and have funny with us. Also I have booked a holiday resort the foll...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29756097561 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36519477876 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0891052899 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4166666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717053806135 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296886598239 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490387168986 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425058976371 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335306416606 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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