You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Dear John
I hope you are doing good. i am writing this letter to state the issue which am facing for a couple of days. The system hanging often during running a graphical design. Although i have optimized the desktop completely, still it hangs a a lot. For your kind information i have formatted them once but still the problem persists. Even though Mr.William came to attend the issue yesterday and he can't find the source of the problem. I fear this lag will cause a profound change in my appointments. Due to this lag i cant able to complete the work on schedule which is alloted to me for instance. Further, am taking a day break tomorrow and i need to complete the work alloted to me by today. Hence i request you to attend this issue a prior utmost one. I hope you will get back to my desk as early as possible.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Manigandan
SOP, Desk-t15, graphical designer

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear John I hope you are doing good. i am writing ...
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Suggestion: I
Dear John I hope you are doing good. i am writing this letter to state the iss...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear John I hope you are doing good. i am writing this letter to state the iss...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ng this letter to state the issue which am facing for a couple of days. The system...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
... the desktop completely, still it hangs a a lot. For your kind information i have f...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the desktop completely, still it hangs a a lot. For your kind information i have...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
... the desktop completely, still it hangs a a lot. For your kind information i have f...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...em once but still the problem persists. Even though Mr.William came to attend the issue yes...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: William
...ll the problem persists. Even though Mr.William came to attend the issue yesterday and ...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...me to attend the issue yesterday and he cant find the source of the problem. I fear ...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...me to attend the issue yesterday and he cant find the source of the problem. I fear ...
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Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nge in my appointments. Due to this lag i cant able to complete the work on sched...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e in my appointments. Due to this lag i cant able to complete the work on schedule w...
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Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...is alloted to me for instance. Further, am taking a day break tomorrow and i need ...
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Line 2, column 638, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...her, am taking a day break tomorrow and i need to complete the work alloted to me...
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Line 2, column 690, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mplete the work alloted to me by today. Hence i request you to attend this issue a pr...
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Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the work alloted to me by today. Hence i request you to attend this issue a prio...
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Line 2, column 809, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t back to my desk as early as possible. Thank you Yours faithfully Manigan...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... desk as early as possible. Thank you Yours faithfully Manigandan SOP, D...
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Line 4, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... early as possible. Thank you Yours faithfully Manigandan SOP, Desk-t15...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ssible. Thank you Yours faithfully Manigandan SOP, Desk-t15, graphical de...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nk you Yours faithfully Manigandan SOP, Desk-t15, graphical designer
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndan SOP, Desk-t15, graphical designer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, still, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53285959961 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2117178395 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137603352433 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533981420644 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654356434401 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056002168149 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056002168149 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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