You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned.
Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter :
describe the problem with the jacket.
Explain what happened when you tried to return it.
Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the jacket I purchased from your store a week ago.
The first problem I encountered was with the color as it looks dull from the left shoulder side as well as holes in the pocket. Furthermore, the zip is not working at all. Naturally, in order to resolve the issue, I contacted the Customer Care Department of your store but unfortunately, they failed to provide me any satisfactory response. Adding to my surprise, they have given strength forward answer the merchandise cannot be returned. Whereas, there is no such term and condition labeled.
I feel this matter deserves your urgent attention and expects you to replace the jacket immediately. Also, as per the Terms and Conditions, request you to kindly refund 30% of total amount as product found faulty. I have attached a copy of the Invoice for your reference.
Hoping for a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Abc Xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a positive response. Yours faithfully, Abc Xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, look, so, well, whereas, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90384461846 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1790122566 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226876025218 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596966463534 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594817524233 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11005059941 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750127112383 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.