Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting
your area. Write a letter to your friend.
- Suggest the places they can visit
- recommend a place where they can stay
- offer something you can do with them.
Hi John,
Hope you are doing good. I am happy to hear that your father and mother have decided to visit the heritage city, Surat next week.
Surat is a beautiful city and has many wonderful tourist places. I would like to suggest some places that your parents should visit. They must definitely explore a fascinating rose garden, the science museum, statue of unity and various ancient temples which are located near the railway station.
Surat is a huge city and there are many good places to stay. But It will be convenient for uncle and aunt to stay at hotel Taj which is located at the center of the city. Since this hotel has a favorable location, it will be convenient and easy for your parents to explore vivid places. Moreover, one can enjoy an amazing sea view by staying at this hotel.
I have a long weekend holiday next week and would love to take uncle and aunt at Club Utopia. It has been constructed recently and is based on various unique themes. I have a prime membership of this club and will be able to assist your parents with complete ease and convenience.
Give my regards to your parents, and if they or you have any queries, feel free to call me. I'll be happy to help.
I assure you that, uncle and aunt will have a memorable trip.
Best Regards
Ram.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sit the heritage city, Surat next week. Surat is a beautiful city and has many w...
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Line 11, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...location, it will be convenient and easy for your parents to explore vivid places...
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Line 19, column 93, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...have any queries, feel free to call me. Ill be happy to help. I assure you that, ...
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Line 27, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...morable trip. Best Regards Ram.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20270215551 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.767799686 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1875 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3125 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211156828168 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635608667219 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066452328525 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103547465553 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392218918909 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.