You recently joined a sports club and are having some problems. Write to the manager and include
Why you joined the club
The problems you are having
Some possible solutions
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you regarding some difficulties faced by me at our sports club. Let me explain to you in more detail.
I have take enrolment last week for the club membership for practicing cricket under19 cadre. As this academy is having a good reputation in our city and I think my hidden talent got immeresed with the help of coaching staff towards cricket and I could reserved a seat at the national team. also I am confident that with my hard efforts and my zeal towards cricket, build my career prospects.
Although, while joining the academy it seems to me negatively and I found that the sports equipment needed such as cricket mat, net have to be immediately repaired as they are quite old and Further the balls, stumps and pads should be replaced with new ones. As, our whole members are facing problems. Secondly the coaching staff is provided is only 1 for a capacity of 40 players, who cannot cater the need of individual and even some day he was absent also.
In view of aforementioned points, I hubmly request you to kindly replaced and repaired the necessary equipmentand also recruit another good knowledgable person due to improper management or if possible change the slot of my timing, so that I can explore the opportunity.
Hope to see positive response from your side.
Regards,
Ram
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...response from your side. Regards, Ram
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, even so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75536480687 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6521174382 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673819742489 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2937516292 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197311542628 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617478916163 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068341880071 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972924630619 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861018743493 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.