It is better to children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on should be involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
child's developmental plays an important role in today's growing scenario. Nowaday's the sole family have been taking a tole, rather than the old conventional family, in which the joint members have reside together and child nurturing takes palce.These changing habits of familiy emerges a highly debatable issue in our society that child nurtuing done in the whole family or at the sole. In this essay, I intend to elucidate the above-mentioned phenomena, and paritally agree with the former notion.
To begin with, those who think that only parents have to grow up their child, with the advent of technological development and education growth, the trend of shifting in to cities for better infrastructural facilities and job prespects may incur growing a child alonely by father and mother. As in today's workaholic culture, where both husband and wife are working to meet the both end meets,to provide the best facilties to their child. although, this features also delve the habit of closeness and a create a bond between parent and a child, on the contrary the child mind also devote towards gadgets and electronic instrument and he became less familiar, and shyin nature with relatives.
On the other side of the view, in a joint family where child is growing with other members of the family and to be shared by the member's of the family, parents can easily worked. In addition to this, by gathering with many members, this also develop a habit of social gathering and build cooperation with peers and also learn them adaptive and rational thinking, in which the kids all around development takes place. For instance, in a family each members of a family has differnet relation, and different nature, while grwoing they can easliy undertake. However, in these type of family the children often get naughty, due to the support of the elders, and may hit negatively effected at their grades too.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that the onus is on to the parents, in which enviornment they prefer although in today's growing scenario, where the family are distributed, it is quite difficult to provide the enviorment of joint family, where a child growth fruitiful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01933701657 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68357760822 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2494082461 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.181818182 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9090909091 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167258466023 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618583838188 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334464474368 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987874646406 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229192478181 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.