you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.How important the licence is to youAsking how he/she found itSaying how you would love to thank him/her.

Essay topics:

you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.

Dear vella

I have received your parcel which was containing my driving licence. I don't know how to thank you for this act of kindness.
you know I was so much in urgent need of my driving licence. because i am having flight next week, i am migrating from India to USA on permanent residency. I was really worried about it, because, if I will not be having driving licence of my country, I am suppose to apply for new driving licence at their country and that process will take near about 1 year, because unlike our country they follow three different stages for giving driving licence to an individual, who does not have any driving experience at their native place. you really are seraph for me. it was with me, untill I paid my bill at the reception of lifestyle shopping mall. after that I don't know where I lost it, please tell me where you found it.

anyways thanks a ton once again. please let me know how I can show my gratitude to you.

thanks/Regards

Neha

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear vella I have received your parcel which was co...
^^^
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...a I have received your parcel which was containing my driving licence. I dont know how to ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ch was containing my driving licence. I dont know how to thank you for this act of k...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...to thank you for this act of kindness. you know I was so much in urgent need of my...
^^^
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...h in urgent need of my driving licence. because i am having flight next week, i am migr...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ent need of my driving licence. because i am having flight next week, i am migrat...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... because i am having flight next week, i am migrating from India to USA on perma...
^
Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...ing driving licence of my country, I am suppose to apply for new driving licence at the...
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Line 4, column 531, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...iving experience at their native place. you really are seraph for me. it was with m...
^^^
Line 4, column 644, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...e reception of lifestyle shopping mall. after that I dont know where I lost it, pleas...
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Line 4, column 657, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f lifestyle shopping mall. after that I dont know where I lost it, please tell me wh...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anyways
..., please tell me where you found it. anyways thanks a ton once again. please let me ...
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...it. anyways thanks a ton once again. please let me know how I can show my gratitude...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
... how I can show my gratitude to you. thanks/Regards Neha
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w my gratitude to you. thanks/Regards Neha
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49720670391 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39170095348 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.4294271161 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198438171442 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811212253224 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061808237547 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156191543043 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211883606243 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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