You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to you to inform about the services we received on 27th Decemberber 2018, during a daylong meeting held at your hotels’ conference area.
My team who also attended the meeting has greatly appreciated the friendliness of the staff and the promptness of the services that they have received. In addition, the decor and cleanliness of the hotel was impressive.
However, we were disappointed in the quality of the food served. The food was cold and some were slightly smelly. The Chowmein that we had ordered was extraordinarily oily, which masked the taste of the food.
I would like to suggest ensuring that the food served is fresh and warm. Also, less oil in food will benefit the health of many customers.
I would be interested to hear about the action you think about this. Thank you in anticipation of your consideration in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Farhana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/madam, I am writing to you to inform about the ...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on in this matter. Yours faithfully, Amy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01973684211 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85170618851 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0947303131 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3636363636 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266329859288 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824855332847 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344354989061 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120620471186 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356096499793 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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