The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Online shopping is rapidly emerging as the most popular form of purchasing items. Nevertheless, it can never be compared to physical shopping and it won’t have any considerable impact on the shops in towns and cities. This essay aims to discuss the reasons before giving a personal opinion.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why the shops will not shut down even if the popularity of online shopping is on the rise. Although nowadays people are inclined towards online shopping, a majority of the population still prefer to physically travel to the shop and inspect the item, such as the quality and color of the item, before making a purchase. Whereas in online stores it is not possible to check these attributes. People, especially women, watch other customers, analysing their preferences, before selecting from a range of options which is not possible through online shopping.
However, the online stores are beneficial to certain groups of people, for instance, job holders. Workers are unable to visit the shops due to work but they can conveniently order from their home or office and at any time of the day. After ordering a product customers have to wait for a few days to receive the item while products are instantly accessible when bought from a physical shop. Moreover, returning a product in online stores is not much cost effective compared to when physically purchased.
Therefore, I believe that even though the online shopping is trending rapidly but a portion of the general population still prefer to visit the shops personally which will ensure their continued existence for a long period.
To recapitulate, I believe shops can not be replaced by online stores as there are several factors that can only be achieved by visiting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... to discuss the reasons before giving a personal opinion. To begin with, there are numerous rea...
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Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of the item, before making a purchase. Whereas in online stores it is not possible to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66373200471 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6955279042 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244695939495 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905258231713 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613366985472 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142564003049 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331972469013 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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