You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a hotel. In your feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say what the participants liked about the hotel.
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to provide some feedback and suggestions regarding an all day event I had helped organize at your hotel for my company.
To begin with, I must say that the response of the participants was overwhelmingly positive when it comes to the facilities and the staff at your hotel. They were very impressed by the state of the art business center, including the projectors, sound system and other devices. I also received great reviews about your staff, about how attentive and courteous they were in responding to any requests from the participants.
On the other hand, the reviews about the food served were not so great. The main complaint was about it not being fresh, for example the salad seemed to be couple days old. Also, the meat was not cooked properly and lot of people had raw pieces of meat.
I think if you can improve the food quality control, which might include talking to your vendors and prior inspection of the food before being served, it would make the hotel an ideal place for future conferences.
Thank you for your help in organizing the event.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... event. Yours faithfully, John Doe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, for example, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82741116751 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51413074646 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7341604568 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385554352382 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128702531387 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612194749718 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193439692661 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406969988412 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.