You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding few issues that I received from my colleagues. I have organised a meeting in your conference room on 22nd April'19.
All participants are very happy at your hospitality received while entering the hotel. Conference room was well decorated and all seating arrangements were perfectly fine. Staffs who were present inside hall always took care of participants.
However, despite all these good efforts from your staff, my colleagues were disappointed at the lunch. There were two main dis satisfactions. Firstly, lunch was served quite late, at around 2.30 P.M. though I had requested earlier to severe lunch on or before 1.30 P.M. Secondly, dishes were not only adequate in numbers but also dirty. Many teammates had waited for extra 30 minutes.
My suggestion is that always serve lunch on time because corporate meetings are time bounded. Entire schedule of the meeting might be changed due to delay in lunch. Furthermore, do count your serving plates beforehand so as to have smooth lunch time.
Hope you will take my concerns and suggestions seriously. Looking forwards to seeing a positive response.
Yous faithfully,
Bibhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...do count your serving plates beforehand so as to have smooth lunch time. Hope you wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77731918613 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.746031746032 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0849343208 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255516093461 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699175225015 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441854674051 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117944500193 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505350293059 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.