You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Can we imagine a life without music? Music is the source of inspiration for many things, as result there are plethora of music variation available in the globe. Every music has some meaning that is why I believe that all music should be given equal importance, but priority must be on traditional one, which I will explain in the further paragraphs.
To embark on, music is a divine spirit and source of relaxation. As human always need some activity to enjoy their life, to express their emotion and to relive their stresses, human evolve music. For instance, our body is energized after listening to energetic song if we are tired. Because of sweet sound in music, our body releases few special hormones that helps us to calm down. Moreover, if one need to talk decision in tensioned environment, a few minutes music break help him/her to think comfortably and positively. In facts, it is scientifically proven that music activates our inner cortexes of our brain, which help us to stay positive and happy.
Next, which music is important - traditional or international - for a nation is a debatable question. Music knows no barrier, therefore it would be wrong if any nation restrict their citizen to practice or enjoy traditional music only. However, a particular music always symbolize a particular tradition or culture. If there is no one to encourage that particular music, it is quite obvious that the specific culture will die down. Hence, various local bodies always emphasis on traditional music rather that international songs. For instance, Khashi - a community in far eastern India- is on the verge of extinction as there is no one to promote or enjoy their traditional music, which is overshadowed by western music.
To recapitulate, music is a source of our enjoyment, celebration and motivation as well. Hence, no one can live without music; in facts, animals also love music. As music has no boundary, therefore, everyone must enjoy all sorts of music. However, individual must pay respect to his/her traditional music as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05899705015 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82778774002 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8565085262 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2631578947 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206253975294 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798971780366 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330014033666 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147952039548 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256102490938 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.