You recently organized all-hand meeting for your company, which took place in a hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked hotel but they were unhappy with the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say:
- say what participants liked about the hotel.
- explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.
Dear Sir/Madam
Our company had organized a meeting in your hotel last week. Although, meeting went well, but I am writing this letter to complaint about the food that was served during the conference.
All our members like your place a lot. They all were happy with space available in room, as it was not congested. Moreover, they also love that the hall was sound proof and an excellent sound system was also arranged by you. everything was going perfect until the our lunch arrived.
The hotel staff prepared bunch of dishes but majority of them were cold. It was seems like that they made it way before and serveing them at that time. Member of my company made a complaint about the soup that it was not heated properly and chicken was also half cooked. Even,there was no arrangement of cold water by staff and no beverage was served. It was an embarrassing situation for me at that time, as I was the one who was responsible to organise that meeting.
For future, I would suggest you to made the food maybe half an hour before they suppose to serve. so that they will not lose taste because of time. In addition to it I think your staff might need to taste the meal before presenting them, so that everything will work fine.
Your sincerely
Manvel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...em, so that everything will work fine. Your sincerely Manvel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59471365639 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30183693996 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.013688734 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32863730022 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104202418552 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053382272695 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191567338722 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568622354399 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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