You recently organized all-hand meeting for your company, which took place in a hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked hotel but they were unhappy with the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say:
- say what participants liked about the hotel.
- explain why they were unhappy about the food.
- suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Ell Green and visited your prestigious hotel with my colleagues to attend an official meeting followed by a lunch. I have collected feedback from the participants and writing to express their dissatisfaction with the served meal quality.
I really appreciate an eye-catching and western styled ambience of the hotel. Moreover, the hotel staff was generous and supportive in all manners. The maitre'd of the hotel was too courteous and helpful to arrange a special seating arrangement for one disabled attendee who was not comfortable sitting on a chair.
I am disappointed to say that served meal was stale and of poor quality. For example, mushy fruits and vegetables and rancid milk was used to prepare the food. In addition to this, some of the participants suffered from food poisoning after meal intake.
I suggest that frequent audit should be conducted to analyze the kitchen of the hotel. In this inspection, hygiene, equipment and raw materials used to cook meal should be focused. Moreover, regular feedback should be collected from patrons to monitor the progress.
I hope that you would consider my valuable feedback and do the needful.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...action with the served meal quality. I really appreciate an eye-catching and w...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and vegetables and rancid milk was used to prepare the food. In addition to this...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... prepare the food. In addition to this, some of the participants suffered from food poisoni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, so, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20304568528 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8614407256 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3317553867 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8461538462 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240065750384 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730589102594 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423824659741 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11475389596 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627406361802 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.