You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1. What is the article about?
2. What is the error?
3. What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the article published about Mr. Woo Aye in November 26th in Strait Time newspaper.
The article briefly described the biography and corruption cases committed by Mr. Aye. The biography started with his childhood life and it then followed by his work and corruption cases involved during his services in a Myanmar oil and gas company.
Some of the information provided in the biography are not accurate. It is stated that he was born in Yangon. Actually, Mr. Aye was born in Mandalay and he moved to Yangon at his age of five. I know this because he is my childhood classmate and we maintain a good relationship since then. Also his education is wrongly written as Bachelor Degree. In reality, he is a Doctor Degree holder.
It will be nice if you can publish the correction in the upcoming newspapers. I believe that the readers are also willing to receive precise information. Please do not hesitate to let me know if you need evidences on the information given.
Thanks for your attention to this letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Yan Naung Aye
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s in a Myanmar oil and gas company. Some of the information provided in the biography a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aintain a good relationship since then. Also his education is wrongly written as Bac...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89947089947 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73937168315 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.311803542 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1428571429 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133981750149 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412171949917 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489351412109 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721575182455 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495959229481 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.