You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
I received your letter yesterday; I hope everything is right there. It is long time we had any such kind of discussion. I am glad that you are asking me to get my opinion regarding your future.
First of all, I suggest you to try to get a job at a junior level, as you have completed under graduation with a bachelor of computer science. You can easily perceive jobs in call centers and mobile companies, and I also know your financial condition is not so good. So in this way, by doing a job, you can continue your higher studies side by side. Besides this, you earn and support your family. This occupation also provides you the practical knowledge. Once you perceive the possible experience, you can jump and try for a higher job in other organizations.
I hope my ideas help you to make the right decision about your career path.
My best wishes are always with you. Best of luck for your bright future.
Yours lovingly
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, regarding, so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50588235294 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50855974063 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3642169747 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9230769231 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256078915953 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090757330963 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429319806173 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131039359739 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580739763882 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.