Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
I am writing this letter to the local council regarding the reconsideration of the decision for termination of the community sports club and leisure center for monetary reasons. Many other society members are also dissatisfied with this decision.
I am a resident of sector seven urban estates, Gurgaon. In society, there is a fitness club; many of us are frequent members of this health center. My family, friends, and I also spend most of the leisure time here in practicing various activities. As you know, sports are essential for good health. Playing games and many other activities makes us physically and mentally healthy and fit. Several games are such as cricket, badminton, basketball, and swimming. All these facilities are available there. Older and younger peoples also perceive yoga classes at the end of the week. The Fitness Council is a great place to utilize free time, and the best thing is that after the office hour’s people can relieve their stress here to engage themselves by playing games and feel cordial. So this is beneficial for the community.
If this sports society is close, this is a significant loss for all the society members because mostly society children are playing games there in the absence of this they mostly spend their time playing video games and watching tv.
So, it is my humble request to society council; please revise your opinion to close this health club.
Yours faithfully
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, regarding, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84836065574 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48433347042 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0080552847 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144989535366 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527244161277 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817645639724 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104788410233 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764731473354 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.