you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about wheter to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he should get a job
Dear my best friend
How are you? Hopefully you and your family are good circumstance. I am writing this letter to give some advice in my best opinion
Actually, you asked me the best choice to get college or job, as my experienced when I took a college. In there I got may theory than practical which necessary in job after studying, you will waste a full time to learn in college which you can knowledge from the partner while taking a job.
As experienced from a number of my friend at the workplace, they got a lot of important skill which needs by the company. After working, they improve they skill to get a high position, for instance take a course of programming which related the job or take a course of language
As I known about your expert skill was promoted some of things when we was in high school. The best choice for you is take a job which related about sales of product. At there you be able to get more experience. And you will get best position if you work smarter and harder.
Wish you all the best and you can consider of my opinion
Speak soon
tsabat
- some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot money how might having a lot of money make people happy what other things in life can make people happy 56
- You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country Write a letter to your manager In your letter explain why you want to work in the company s head office for six months say how your work 73
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inc 56
- you recently attended a meeting at a hotel when you returned home you found had left some important at the hotel 73
- you have just read in a national newspaper which claims that your town center in my country all look very similar to each other 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear my best friend How are you? Hopefully you and your fami...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...in job after studying, you will waste a full time to learn in college which you can knowl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted the job or take a course of language As I known about your expert skill was p...
^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the things') or simply say ''some things''.
Suggestion: some of the things; some things
...wn about your expert skill was promoted some of things when we was in high school. The best ch...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsider of my opinion Speak soon tsabat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34482758621 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36521952238 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.123710997 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344508089253 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150222344242 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592222445292 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169009574385 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890731809593 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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