Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Respected Sir,
I am writing to discuss the problem we will face due to closure of tha sports and leisure center of the locality. As we all know there is no place to spend our leisure time or perform sports activities nearby, entire locality comes to your sports center. We spend time relaxing over their with family and friends.
Kids are safe as they don't have to play on streets. Parents will face a lot of inconvenience. It will become impossible to organise social events if the ground is not available. Apart from that people will not find place to do exercise, this will affect our health, people will become lazy. This center is the only place where all gather, and discuss our problems. Organise social events and stay fit and be happy.
After our tiring day, we come to center to become fresh, meet our friens, spend time with family and kids, it's a place where every one finds pleasure to spend there time, stay fit through sports & gym. So I request you not to close the center, Infact try to hold a meeting on this with all of us.We will try to find the possible solution. Hope you will consider my request.
Thanks you,
Yours obediently,
Dextor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Respected Sir, I am writing to discuss the problem we w...
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...ng over their with family and friends. Kids are safe as they dont have to play ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... Kids are safe as they dont have to play on streets. Parents will f...
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Suggestion:
...cial events and stay fit and be happy. After our tiring day, we come to center ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...riens, spend time with family and kids, its a place where every one finds pleasure ...
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...nfact try to hold a meeting on this with all of us.We will try to find the possib...
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Suggestion: We
... hold a meeting on this with all of us.We will try to find the possible solution....
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.... Hope you will consider my request. Thanks you, ...
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... Thanks you, Yours obediently, ...
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... Yours obediently, Dextor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58851674641 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20443276367 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2429442863 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7692307692 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14680258297 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510995189327 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660677137433 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723416449991 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074965079912 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.