You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Mark,
How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met. I have received your letter asking for advice on whether to go to a college or to get a job. In my opinion I would suggest you to get a job. Let me explain the reasons in detail.
To elucidate as you have recently completed your tertiary education thus going into the same environment would make your life monotonous thus affecting your studies. Although getting a master degree is beneficial but not at this stage. Hence I would suggest getting a job which will help you to gain some industry experience and improve your financial condition so that you can support your higher studies without putting a further financial burden on your guardians. Additionally, I would like to highlight that there is an increasing trend that after completing the tertiary education students tend to gain some industry experience as it gives them additional weightage and preference when they apply for higher studies in reputed universities.
Lastly, I would suggest since you completed your degree in computer science, therefore,<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="science "></span> I would suggest pursuing software testing or software development jobs.
I look forward to your response and hope you make the right decision.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mark, How have you been? it has been a long ti...
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Dear Mark, How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Let me explain the reasons in detail. To elucidate as you have recently comple...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ee is beneficial but not at this stage. Hence I would suggest getting a job which wil...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ur degree in computer science, therefore, ^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e testing or software development jobs. I look forward to your response and hope...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u make the right decision. Warm wishes Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2676056338 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52929256582 2.54303337028 139% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.0720585657 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273964801343 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106474799061 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125970833019 0.0603063233224 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160030837432 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110343418601 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.