You recently saw a job advertisement for a tour guide, to show your local area and its attractions to English-speaking tourists. Write a letter to a tourist agency and say
– Where did you see this advertisement?
– Explain why you are suitable for this job.
– Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you of a recent advertisement that your tour agency posted in the local newspaper for the position of tour guide. I would like to state that I am keen on this position.
To elucidate I am a graduate and have attained English writing and speaking skills apart from this I have worked as a freelance tour guide at various art museums and forts in Alwar which are a centre of attraction globally. Additionally, I have also a keen interest in learning about historical items which helps in explaining the same facts in greater depth to the tourists especially the ones who come from overseas.
Apart from this, I believe that forts and museums are a part of our rich history and culture and nowadays they are in bad shape as the local government does not pay attention due to the lack of finances. To elucidate, I would suggest starting a paid tickets for visiting the attraction sites so that some revenue can be generated to start the repair work of these sites. apart from this, the local businesses around these sites can also give a certain amount which can use to improve the landscape around these sites and help to attract more tourists.
I look forward to your response and hope my suggestions are taken into consideration.
Yours sincerely
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 6, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...o start the repair work of these sites. apart from this, the local businesses around ...
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Line 6, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ites and help to attract more tourists. I look forward to your response and hope...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en into consideration. Yours sincerely Tim
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72052401747 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61557107125 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5186302593 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237064957543 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866176452129 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925005214044 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135105298664 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116185035482 0.0580467560999 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.