You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am writing to complain about the cooling system of your hotel. I stayed at your hotel in suite 204 last week due to work purpose.
During the week, the temperature outside went up to 40 degree Celsius as mentioned in the news. The heat inside the room was unbearably higher than outside as the air conditioner emitted hot air. Furthermore, there was no air cooler to vent out the heat.
Consequently, one of the staff had a backup stand fan which we used during the nights. we looked for other hotels but we could not find any at such short notice as it was Christmas next week.
Needless to say, it was unexpected that the hotel would not have a backup air cooler in case of emergency situations. I would like to request you to monitor and maintain the electronic devices every month and repair the faulty once at the earliest possible.
I look forward to hearing the measures you have taken.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...nd fan which we used during the nights. we looked for other hotels but we could no...
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Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: ''.
...find any at such short notice as it was Christmas next week. Needless to say, it was...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80473372781 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59189159384 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3874948786 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22347857381 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842653060855 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484371907398 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106883193201 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628229473317 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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