You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
-- explain why you took the job
-- describe the problems that you experienced
-- suggest what could be done about them.
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am nisha bhan, one of the part-time associate in the Supply Chain Department of your company. it’s been 2 years now since I am working with your company. I like my job very much and would like to do it with full dedication and passion as I know it is a good platform to grow and excel in career.
However, I am writing this letter to bring this to your kind attention that I am a first year university student. I am pursuing my Master’s in Business Communication. I usually have a tight schedule. The problem what I am facing is that when my shift ends, the second shift employees do not come on time resulting I always get late for my class. As I cannot leave my workstation unattended, so I have to wait for them to come and take over the charge. I would have managed the situation but from next week, I have my examinations starting and hence leaving with no other option I have to inform you. Although, I requested them to come on time but they always pay deaf ear to my request.
Therefore, I humble request you to look into the matter and take some strict action so that no one’s work get hampered because of other. Hope to get a solution as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
nisha bhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...upply Chain Department of your company. it's been 2 years now since I am working w...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d platform to grow and excel in career. However, I am writing this letter to bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4347826087 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62999996406 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4774217785 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165127798448 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490520393039 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393717433684 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106943703575 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040922159545 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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