You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company.
In your letter
• Explain why you took the job
• Describe the problems that you experienced
• Suggest what could be done about them
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing about a few problems that have probed in process of projects in your company. This process could be improve if you use new technique that released in last year.
I joined to your company 4 weeks ago because of my eldest children accepted in Melbourne genius private school and must pay 3000$ every month while I had get a loan from ABC bank to buy a new machine, in result I must work hardly at my extra time.
When I have asked to give project’s documents from my coworker unfortunately receive a few sheet which write by hand and without analysis software also you use Microsoft Access to maintain data that sometimes your customers complain in issue that their PC will hang.
I think we can upgrade our methodology and move toward new released knowledge and techniques. For example, many of companies use Microsoft SQL Server to save and keep their data’s application because that is very fast and powerful and compatible with Microsoft Windows operating system also for analyses a system we should use Visual Paradigm tools to draw diagram and flowchart in lowest time.
I hope this solutions are efficiently for our company and helpful on company’s incoming.
Yours faithfully
Aboo Alexandri
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- You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.Write a letter to the manager of the company.In your letter•Explain why you took the job•Describe the problems that yo 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$3000'.
Suggestion: $3000
...urne genius private school and must pay 3000$ every month while I had get a loan from...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
... must pay 3000$ every month while I had get a loan from ABC bank to buy a new machi...
^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
... must pay 3000$ every month while I had get a loan from ABC bank to buy a new machi...
^^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
... to buy a new machine, in result I must work hardly at my extra time. When I have asked to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sheet seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sheets'.
Suggestion: few sheets
...rom my coworker unfortunately receive a few sheet which write by hand and without analysi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the lowest'.
Suggestion: in the lowest
...igm tools to draw diagram and flowchart in lowest time. I hope this solutions are effici...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...m and flowchart in lowest time. I hope this solutions are efficiently for our compa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94312796209 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73322922409 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696682464455 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6139223922 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.375 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112200165226 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473380370104 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347415573886 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584109540135 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439740848471 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.