You recently visited a store to repair your computer but they couldn't fix it , write a letter to the store manager and say,
- what was the problem with your computer?
- What happened in the store?
- What do you want them to do about it?
Dear Manager,
I'm writing to tell you that last day i visited your store to repair my computer that I bought from your shop and still under guarantee.
Two days ago, I turned it on everything was working properly, suddenly a blue screen appeared and kept restarting, I turned off and brought to your store.
I clarified the problem to one of your employees, he took it for checking, the issue appeared again and nothing he can do. I left the laptop at your shop for diagnosing the matter and still waiting for a call from your side.
I would like to know if the trouble repaired. if the pc needs a fresh windows installation, I prefer to exchange to a new desktop since it still within the warranty.
Thanks for taking these notes into consideration and expecting a feedback from your side as soon as possible.
Sincerely Yours,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-12 | imjaythanki | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-27 | sreejithsree | 67 | view |
| 2019-04-09 | enassar | 73 | view |
| 2019-04-09 | enassar | 73 | view |
| 2019-04-09 | enassar | 73 | view |
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both the view and give you’re opinion. 73
- Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 73
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.In your lettergive contact details for when you are awaygive instructions about how to care for your petdescribe other household duties 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Manager, Im writing to tell you that last day i vis...
^^
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Im writing to tell you that last day i visited your store to repair my compute...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ill waiting for a call from your side. I would like to know if the trouble repai...
^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...d like to know if the trouble repaired. if the pc needs a fresh windows installati...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64429530201 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60763950605 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664429530201 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5350140002 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206787943939 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705278917115 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824949965709 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105092330077 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956038928932 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.