Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society.
These days, our lives become hard to live than previously, everything changed even spending time at home is less than before. That's why there are reasons causing people to stay and spend less time at home, and this will have bad effects on individuals and society.
On one hand, several reasons let people to spend less and less time at home, which will cause them difficulties in living. One main reason is work, where the majority of people spend most of their time working to have more income. Second, traffic also causes them to stay away from home, if their job requires from them to move to a far place. However, family duties impose people to provide them with their needs and stay out from home, to pay bills, follow up on their children at school and to secure a healthy and great life for them. For example, I still remember when my father used to drive all day and night on his truck, where we usually see him only twice a week, to provide his family needs.
On the other hand, these reasons will effect in many ways on individuals life and on society. First, people will face lack of social life and communication, this will effect on persons character negatively, and keep them far from people and get used to live alone. Second, it will effect on individuals, where they'll feel that no one taking care or hanging out with them, and this will increase their thought to stay out from home and spend their time at work or somewhere else alone. Therefore, staying away and spend less time at home, will change people's lives negatively and may impact on many families. For example, on of our neighbors till today, he visits his parents and family once each month, due to his job duties, where it oblige him to spend more time at work, to provide his family with their needs.
Finally, people duties and lifestyle changed, but these changes have causes and effects on their daily life. So, each one should know how to handle such situations, to avoid any conflict and lack of communication in society and between individuals.
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These days our lives become…
These days our lives become harder than earlier, everything changed even spending time at home also become less. There are several reasons behind that which has bad impact on individual and society. I will illustrate these reasons and their impacts below.
In ancient time, people used to live at home with family and do business, job nearby home. However, in current period way of living changed alot. Today’s generation become more career oriented and to fulfill their goals they are relocating far from their house even overseas as well. Same for students as well they are preferring study overseas ,universities in other corner of country which is making them to become hosteler. They are spending less time with their families at own house. Another reason is people love travelling these days. They prefer to hang around on solo trips or either with friends. Travelling to other cities of country and abroad obliges them to spend more time outside their house.
Obviously, person’s absence at home has enormous impact on individual and society. Those who sojourn in hostels they are missed from warmth of their blood relations. They have been ignorant from their culture and family rituals such as missing most of the festivals due to lack of leaves. They are unaware of traditions and its importance in our lives. Another impact is people who are living alone become habitual to isolated environment. Family environment becomes strange to them. Family is not in their objectives hence they have started giving less importance to personal relationships. They face difficulties to mingle with others mostly with elders. To illustrate this, few girls who are living in hostels before marriage are unaware from family environment. As a result, in starting they have to struggle alot to adjust in new house with new family. Due to lack of understanding of family environment divorce rates speeds up in world.
In conclusion I would say that there are several reasons behind that people living far from their house and less with families which has numerous impacts on individual and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63360881543 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20909157899 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3246736743 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323979124904 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139022510106 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127963662923 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224802983764 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12723741999 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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