You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
• say how you feel about his/her performance
• give details of your music-related activities
• explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in regards to your last concert which was held in the National theater hall. I really enjoyed concert throughout and melodious music really hypnotized me.
Being as a guitarist, I would like to ask you for some suggestion. I play guitar quite well and member of the local music band. We used to perform during some local events and special occasions. Since I always dreamed to be a famous musician and fulfil that I requires your valuable guidance. I would appreciate if you could suggest me reputed musical class to take to enhanced my music skill quickly.
Further to this, to take a training at reputed class under the supervision of experience master would help to develop my skill quickest and bring positive sense of consequences. In addition to learning various other techniques would definitely add one feature to skill which also help to connect with the musician community of our province.
I am looking forward to your guidance in subject matter. Thank you very much in advance for your suggestion and time.
Yours sincerely,
Nirman Gondliya.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-24 | NIRMAN GONDLIYA | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing in regards to your last con...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing in regards to your last concert which was held in the...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
... be a famous musician and fulfil that I requires your valuable guidance. I would appreci...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... to enhanced my music skill quickly. Further to this, to take a training at reputed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62296220398 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6529977579 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19617440845 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659226261776 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654982966612 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106867103316 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550100094283 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.