You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Write at least 250 words.
Since few decades, industrial and technological expansion has damaged environment immensely and the wild life and forest has also not been spared. Hence, in some of the developed or under developed countries, the population of wild animals and jungles start disappearing. There are numerous causes behind this continuous dwindling numbers which i will discuss in this essay with possible precautionary solutions.
The deforestation is one of the main reasons for decreasing numbers of trees in forest which further leads to destruction effect on wild animal’s habitats and therefore animals start suffering without adequate food and shelter and in result premature death. In addition to this, animals have been killed for various other reasons such for food, for few people killing of animals became leisure time activities and animal organs trade fueling these killing, for instance elephants have been killed for their tusk, lion and tigers been killed for their membrane etcetera.
Now there are several possible ways to protect and prevent this destruction of wild life and jungles. First, governments along with local communities should run the various awareness campaign to make people aware about consequence of mass killing of animals and disappearing of forest. In addition to this, state should carry out strict rules and regulations and convicted shall be levied hugely. Furthermore, facilities should be developed for artificial cultivation and breeding of endangers species and plant before they extinct.
In conclusion, there are various causes responsible for dwindling numbers of animals and plant species. However, in my opinion it can be prevented by implementing strict rules and regulations and by spreading awareness across communities for its potential consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71111111111 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87949326818 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2931046519 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159245188103 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688249988602 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042046784974 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10435069706 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550087298418 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.